Description:Write an explanation about something you have learned about energy.
use a range of verbs (evaporate, melt, etc.)
use a variety of specific vocabulary (matter, solid, liquid, gas)
add significant detail to describe each part (examples, diagram, giff)
vary sentence starters
organise my ideas into at least 5 paragraphs
Evaluation: I think my sample needs work but other than I think I did well.
Buddy Feed back: Very good explanation Tabitha. Lots of explaining. You can improve on having nicer writing.
Do you know what a newtons cradle is?
A newtons cradle is model made by sir Isaac Newton.
He made to help people understand kinetic and potential energy.
For example when you rub your hands together they are getting warmer because you are applying fiction.
Just like when you get bucket of beads and leave a bit hanging out of the side and pull it, if you pull in hard enough it will fall out by it;s self because one side is heaver then the other.
If you get a tennis ball and a basket ball and hold them both up then drop them at the same time you will find that the basket ball will bounce higher and for longer because it has more potential energy.
WALT: Collect ideas or experiences
Task: Make a page in our writers notebooks about what we have done naughty or what someone else has done naughty
What I Learned: I learned that words don't tell everything for some people they need pictures to understand.
Here is my page about naughtiness.
WALT: Make a mnomic as a merory aid to rember spelling word
Purpse: we did this to remember our spelling words
Process: It took me 5 days just to make this pic collage!
Evaluation: I think I did pretty well next time I could get it done sooner.
Buddy Feed-Back: well done this is awesome you really made it colourful next time you should make the word a different color to the backround.
Thanks Aria -Tabitha :)